Bu went the time travel “OK i'm
sending coordinates at 519436298
got that ?“ asked the evil general
“YES SIR!” yelled the minions
“ OK leader there going to kill
the country no country no us
"explained soldier 76 then a person
was guarding a door (explosion)
“what was that!” yelled the evil
general then the power was out
“what happened to the power?”
asked a minion “bu” said dicing
minions puff “the powers back
but darker well going to send it
wait that is ours to late bur
"said the evil general bu went
time travel again . atom blast
sending coordinates at 519436298
got that ?“ asked the evil general
“YES SIR!” yelled the minions
“ OK leader there going to kill
the country no country no us
"explained soldier 76 then a person
was guarding a door (explosion)
“what was that!” yelled the evil
general then the power was out
“what happened to the power?”
asked a minion “bu” said dicing
minions puff “the powers back
but darker well going to send it
wait that is ours to late bur
"said the evil general bu went
time travel again . atom blast
That's all folks
Great writing, Aedyn! You were creative with the vocabulary you used and how you ended your writing.
ReplyDeleteYou could add one of these sentences to explain your writing:
This activity was about......I was learning to ......
thank you miss gallagher for the feed back
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