“Zzzzzzzz” snoozed Aedyn errrrr errrr went the alarm “uhh” yawned Aedyn then he thought about a donut and then a donut appeared “what?” Aedyn said confused . he ate it “wow I didn't know I could do that then he flough up through the wonderful land and then he knew he was king and a golden robe with red stripes . With a gold crown with rubies ,sapphires and diamonds appeared then he was lonely and then he thought of people , nights and a wizard and his name was joe . joe knew that Aedyn I mean king Aedyn was going to forget about joe. Joe was furious and blasted Aedyn with his wizard wand and Aedyn recovered from the blast and shot joe then he recovered then the war began … to be continued!!!!!!
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