My story by Aedyn
“Look over there mexicans!” yelled Trump “where's my button ahh there I can't believe it says wall” exclaimed Trump.
Two mexicans hid in the white house “amigo what is Trump doing?” asked Aedyn
“I don’t know amigo?”questioned Alberto
“trump I found two mexicans in the White house!” yelled Jeff
“OHNO!” yelled Trump
(meanwhile) The mexicans Alberto and Aedyn found guns “lock and load amigo?”asked Aedyn
“si amigo” alberto said back“amigo let’s hunt trump amigo” asked Aedyn “si” Alberto asked back (si is yes in mexico language just to tell you).
And "pff" shot Aedyn “DAMMIT” yelled Aedyn
“💡 Aedyn we both shoot at the same time” exclaimed Alberto
“ok” happily smiled Aedyn so they did and won the war against mexico and U.S.A 
This is a piece of my free writing. I had to remember to include dialog, and crosss out the word said.
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